A Stream Runs Through It

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Comment by Candi Hogan on September 11, 2016 at 8:57

Thanks Michael!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on September 11, 2016 at 7:38

Hi Candi.  Be alert for all those straight diagonal lines you have .. both implied and actual.  Would like to see a higher value of light at the focal point ... maybe punch up the sunlit green and the yellow grass next to the tree?  Be also careful of the "little ducks in a row" thing you have going with those 4 background trees.  :)

Comment by Candi Hogan on September 10, 2016 at 21:59

Thanks Silvana!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on September 10, 2016 at 14:19

Beautiful landscape!!

Comment by Candi Hogan on September 10, 2016 at 10:02

Thanks Ann, I just can't seem to break out of my monochromatic mode!  Have an appt. to get my eyes tested the end of the month, maybe that will help (wishful thinking)!

Comment by Ann Turner on September 10, 2016 at 9:29

Like your simple shapes and composition Candi. I would like to see a few highlights to bring a focal point.