6x8 oil, plein air

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Comment by Laurena Beirnes on August 16, 2016 at 3:31

Whew!! Thank you Michael!  I will incorporate your suggestions.  Thank you for taking the time to critique and add comments as I learn so much has from them.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on August 13, 2016 at 13:34

Very, very nice Laurena!!   I like your shapes very much .... especially the water shape.  Love your broken lines at the waters edge ...  very good.   I like your brush strokes indicating distance .. vertical strokes for foreground, horizontal for background ..excellent.  Nice shapes on your trees.  Would love to see those mountains not so ... neutral ....  keep them grayed, but give them a color like ..... a bluish/violet or something like that .. some specific color that can be identified.  The sun is coming from the right, so beef up your lights where the stream goes around the bend ... that will be your focal point. Just put some warm sunlight highlights on the right edge of your left tree and some on the grass ... don't need to go crazy on that though.  Excellent painting!!!!

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