Well, I won't put it in the workshop - seeing as it's already there! - but this is it revised following Michael's pointers about painting and Andras' about boatbuilding! (I didn't move a mast to get rid of the 4 equal intervals - should do, of course!)

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Comment by Jon Main on June 29, 2016 at 23:01

Thanks a lot, Dor! (and for your comments on my other ones!)

Comment by Dorian Aronson on June 29, 2016 at 10:44

Fantastic painting John.  I really like the changes you have made!  Smiles and happying paint to you :)

Comment by Silvana M Albano on June 28, 2016 at 7:58

:D !!!

Comment by Jon Main on June 28, 2016 at 6:11

Silava, - quite fancy a dolphin-watching trip round the bay in it - don't you?! ;D

Comment by Silvana M Albano on June 27, 2016 at 10:42

Super! Anchoring yourself to land!!

Comment by Jon Main on June 27, 2016 at 6:27

Thanks for keeping me anchored, Michael!  :=)

Comment by Michael J. Severin on June 27, 2016 at 1:19

Nice Jon, note how that boat cast shadow now ties everything together as one large shape. There is a better relationship between the elements of your composition and the edge of your canvas.  It keeps the composition from .... floating away ...pun intended.

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