12x14 oil on canvas. critique is very welcome. I revisited to try to adjust my scale on Luke. Still a little small but better I think. Also adjusted her dress and ocean a little. Any suggestions on how to improve I appreciate. Workshop 63

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Comment by Dorian Aronson on April 3, 2017 at 4:47

I love your idea of crab digging!  Smiles :-)

Comment by Adrienne DeSaulniers on April 2, 2017 at 9:56
Thank you Jessica! I really appreciate it. I redid a bunch on her hat. I would love to learn more about figure drawing. It's very challenging but rewarding. This was my first attempt and really enjoyed it.
Comment by Jessica Futerman on April 2, 2017 at 9:13

Lovely work, Adrienne; I think you've improved it - I especially like the softness of the hat & the edge work on her dress.  

Comment by Adrienne DeSaulniers on April 1, 2017 at 6:20
Thank you so much for your sweet comments steinunn.
Comment by Steinunn Einarsdottir on April 1, 2017 at 1:33

A lovely descriptive work Andrienna, showing the movement the wind is making and I love the idea of crab digging.:)

Comment by Adrienne DeSaulniers on March 31, 2017 at 5:54
That's a good idea! It was a little added pressure of having it be Richards kids! Thank you for your help. ☺️☺️
Comment by Gail Richardson on March 31, 2017 at 4:16
Lol! Richard's kids must be having fun viewing everyone's version of them! Maybe they should pick this month's winner lol.
Comment by Adrienne DeSaulniers on March 31, 2017 at 3:41
Thank you Gail!! It still could use some improvements but definitely better. I feel like I should put a disclaimer for poor Luke " I tried, I really tried... sorry buddy ". Lol. I think next time I will sketch it a few times on a separate sheet of paper for scale and positioning and try it out on the canvas before committing to paint.
Comment by Gail Richardson on March 31, 2017 at 0:25
I love your adjustments - very nicely done!!

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