16 X 16 inches
WSOil
Canvas Paper

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Comment by Sharon Casavant on November 28, 2013 at 7:45

Nice glow on the rock and color compliments!

Comment by Birdie on November 24, 2013 at 11:22

I've read through the comments and see that you aren't happy with it. There are some parts that are just brilliant, like the spray from the wave and the reflections in the sand. I think the only thing needed is some lighter and brighter values in the curl of the wave. I think you'd find that really makes it pop. For a lesson painting I think you've done well.

Comment by Ningning Li on November 22, 2013 at 11:57

Dorian, I love this one. Clean fresh and watery. Those two brave birds were very well done in terms of color and shape. It is not that easy to paint the likeness as it seems. You mentioned that you are not very happy about it. I checked it. I think maybe the warm part of the waves could be lighter some where to make them lighter value than  the big rock and  semi transparent which you always do very well for your other paintings. Just for your reference.  Again, this is a beautiful piece, value, colour combination, brush strokes, detail description of those shapes of the water movement, rocks and birds, natural and nice!

Comment by Nora Mackin on November 18, 2013 at 3:08

   Really like the blues throughout this painting.  

Comment by Dorian Aronson on November 15, 2013 at 18:02

Very nice of you to comment Caroline.  I appreciate your words so much.  Thank you........Smiles : ))

Comment by Caroline Lee King on November 15, 2013 at 16:58

I do love your suttle blend of color and smooth transitions. There are so many beautiful calm  areas. I need to be able to add that to my very busy paintings :)

Comment by Dorian Aronson on November 14, 2013 at 22:39

Thank you Sharon, "that part I did  like" but that wave is the pits and I have not tried to fix it yet.  Smiles to you : ))

Comment by Sharon Casavant on November 14, 2013 at 13:25

Very nice Dor!  I like the shimmering sand!  Also, nice contrast.

Comment by Dorian Aronson on November 13, 2013 at 12:06

Hi Mannerherrin

For the Blue/Violet I used what Richard used "Ultramarine Blue + Pyrrole Red + Magenta + White"   adding a speck of Carbazole Violet in some places.

Smiles to you : ))

Comment by Dorian Aronson on November 13, 2013 at 11:49

Thank you George, however I am very unhappy with it!  Smiles are on there way.......: ))

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