Path to Catalinas

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Comment by Candi Hogan on July 6, 2016 at 4:28

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Comment by Candi Hogan on July 6, 2016 at 4:27

Thanks Michael, see what you are saying!  I'm going to paint  oth og these mountain scenes

Comment by Michael J. Severin on July 6, 2016 at 3:11

Hi Candi.  Very nice .. I love the mountains! ... excellent job on that.  The ridge line creates a wonderful negative shape with the sky!!   I see you paid attention to intervals! .. excellent!  Your title  ... "Path to the Catalinas" ... give us the "path".  Open up those bushes somewhere to take us back there.  See that triangle shape on the left?  Open that up and take us through there ... show more of the Saguaro cactus and the valley beyond.  This way we have the movement of the glance from left to right to your main tree, then back to the opening and through the opening to your now .. second point of interest .. the Saguaro .. then after pausing to take a look at the wonderful job you did with that, we move further along the "path" to the valley and then to the mountain.  Then have a little shaft of light way out there in the distance to bring the eye there!  Hope I made sense there?