Santa Barbara Boardwalk 24x18 revised

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Comment by Candi Hogan on October 24, 2016 at 17:06

Jeri looks sooo good now! The diners, umbrlla, and spaces between pillars look perfect now!  Woo Hoo, great painting!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on October 23, 2016 at 17:41

I am happy your painting was successful!!  ..   keep in mind Jeri, (and everyone else), all the things I discuss are ... not .... written in stone.   .. everything is about relationships.  BTW, there is one thing I noticed that you .. Might ... want to take care of.  The top plane of the little wall cannot be dark .. it is in sunlight.  Therefore, it needs to be in your sunlight values.  Make it the same value and color as the lighter  patches on your walkway  .. I am assuming the wall is made of the same material?

Comment by Jeri McDonald on October 23, 2016 at 7:12

Thanks again Michael for the input. It made all the difference. I just couldn't see it and now it makes much more sense.

Comment by Jon Main on October 22, 2016 at 8:15

Nice, Jeri - well done!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on October 21, 2016 at 17:15

You nailed it Jeri!  Nice work.  Now I get a sense of sunlight as values and color temperatures are better related.

Comment by Adrienne DeSaulniers on October 21, 2016 at 16:28

looks great! you have made it more richly colored than previous, those small changes made a big difference. the shadowing in the foreground and under the umbrellas looks great.

Comment by Jeri McDonald on October 21, 2016 at 12:36

Hey Ann! Thank you! I think it is much better!

Comment by Ann Turner on October 21, 2016 at 7:50

WOW ! The small changes tie it all together. Congratulations