I bought Richard’s sunset videos a while ago and thought it is time to do the workshops as I would like to do sunsets. Crit welcome!

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Comment by Aurelia Sieberhagen on September 6, 2014 at 18:46

Thank you.  I repaint this one, but still need to do some work on it.  Will upload it when I'm finished.  Yes, time is always a problem.  I bought many of Richard's workshops the beginning of last year and still haven't' done them!

Comment by Olivia O'Carra on September 6, 2014 at 6:44

Great work Aurelia and very helpful comments. Ive also bought the videos but have yet to find time to look at them !

Comment by Dorian Aronson on September 2, 2014 at 5:53

I agree with all the comments posted.  Your beach and water are especially beautiful.  Smiles ;-)

Comment by Michael J. Severin on September 1, 2014 at 1:37

Very, very nice Aurelia!! ...I do agree with all of the comments posted ....everything else is pretty darn good!!!

Comment by Aurelia Sieberhagen on August 31, 2014 at 18:41

Thanks for your very helpful comments.  Yes, the sky hole on the right was bothering me big time, and I fixed it several times, but it just doesn't want to get right.  But now I know what is wrong with it and hopefully know how to fix that.  I will move the figures to the left.

Joy, it is oil.

Thank you all for your crit.  I appreciate that!

Comment by Ann Turner on August 31, 2014 at 13:44

Beautiful light and shadow on the land area, the shore and people are especially nice. Watch your negative cloud shapes in the sky, on the left there are two shapes that are clones and on the right almost a figure as pointed out by Thomas. Try to check both positive and negative shapes to see if your right brain has been up to some mischief

Comment by Thomas wezwick on August 31, 2014 at 9:04
Hi, ....well , you sure have some nice color, anda very soft feeling to this painting...What really shouts out to me is that on the left side of your sky, the blue sky is behind the clouds, as it should be...( well done).....On the right side.......The blue sky is in front of your clouds....do you see that???........almost looking like a figure with arms and legs...........What doyou think??????????...The rest of the painting..........very nice....
Comment by Sandi Lear on August 31, 2014 at 9:03

Lovely colours and light, some lovely darks - very well done!

...constructive criticism?  I agree with Joy, it is such a soft painting, the hard edges in your clouds grab the attention and lead your eye out of the painting.  The people are super, perhaps they could move a little more to the left so they are not in the middle of the work, and just vary the distance between them a little..

Comment by Jon Main on August 31, 2014 at 8:46

Good color!

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