I bought Richard’s sunset videos a while ago and thought it is time to do the workshops as I would like to do sunsets. Crit welcome!
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Thank you. I repaint this one, but still need to do some work on it. Will upload it when I'm finished. Yes, time is always a problem. I bought many of Richard's workshops the beginning of last year and still haven't' done them!
Great work Aurelia and very helpful comments. Ive also bought the videos but have yet to find time to look at them !
I agree with all the comments posted. Your beach and water are especially beautiful. Smiles ;-)
Very, very nice Aurelia!! ...I do agree with all of the comments posted ....everything else is pretty darn good!!!
Thanks for your very helpful comments. Yes, the sky hole on the right was bothering me big time, and I fixed it several times, but it just doesn't want to get right. But now I know what is wrong with it and hopefully know how to fix that. I will move the figures to the left.
Joy, it is oil.
Thank you all for your crit. I appreciate that!
Beautiful light and shadow on the land area, the shore and people are especially nice. Watch your negative cloud shapes in the sky, on the left there are two shapes that are clones and on the right almost a figure as pointed out by Thomas. Try to check both positive and negative shapes to see if your right brain has been up to some mischief
Lovely colours and light, some lovely darks - very well done!
...constructive criticism? I agree with Joy, it is such a soft painting, the hard edges in your clouds grab the attention and lead your eye out of the painting. The people are super, perhaps they could move a little more to the left so they are not in the middle of the work, and just vary the distance between them a little..
Good color!
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