"Have a look at Stu's Sail it could help yours by introducing more colours into it. also the way that you have done the sail of the other boat perhaps showed its not needed at all. I like the way you have zoomed in a bit to make the rock warm…"
"I like the warm tonality of the painting Tim. I see some nice cool broken colors in the shadows of the buildings. Would like to see the highlight of the sail a little warmer and lighter. Also the color of the sail in general could be…"