Look closely at the ball bearing.  I am holding the ball in my left hand in the painting and painted myself as such.  Hey! this counts as self portrait in my books… :).  Please do provide your feedback, if you have any, to improve this painting.  Thanks… :)

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Comment by Faisal Tariq on June 23, 2014 at 13:27

Hi Rodrgo,

Thanks very much for your feedback.  I think the hand is the culprit based on what everyone on this forum is saying.  ( I have received all the feedbacks in the Photos section).  I am going to post an updated version of this next.

Thanks

Faisal

Comment by Rodrigo Leal on June 22, 2014 at 21:36

Hi there, Faisal. The effect of the image on the spheric is great, in my point of view. The hand, that is not so much. If i may say so, why don´t you try to work on it a bit more? Maybe, i´m saying maybe, you could have a more nicer composition. You know, the hand is taking the focal point of interest away.... My feeling about it.

Great theme!

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