Acrylic approx 20 x 28cm
My fist workshop. i look forward to your suggestion

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Comment by Diana dean on July 3, 2016 at 12:25
Thank you Richard, I enjoyed my first workshop with you. Quite a learning curve getting around the computer side of things. I will look into improving the photography.
Comment by Richard Robinson on July 1, 2016 at 11:11

Beautiful beautiful work! Awful photo. A word to the wise - I can't use poor photos for magazine critiques.

Comment by Rajesh K Sharma on June 29, 2016 at 4:15
Nicely done Diana.
Comment by Diana dean on June 28, 2016 at 19:59
Thank you Cristina, hard but fun.
Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on June 28, 2016 at 14:35

Good job,Diana! 

Comment by Diana dean on June 28, 2016 at 11:52

Thank you for taking the time to critic Michael, some very good advise there, i will attempt to apply it.

i enjoyed this workshop, but only joined on the 23rd so didn't have much time.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on June 27, 2016 at 14:22

Great work Diana!  ...  very confident and lively brushwork.  I like how you have used edges and detail to make the large boat the focal point .. your other elements support it nicely.  One thing Diana.  You have a slight problem with value and temperature. The shadow side of the large boat is the same value and color temperature as the light side.  Maybe a more middle value gray (burnt sienna and UB + wt) instead of just off white? ... The gray would then have bounced warm reflected light in it ... the value difference between the shadow side of the red part and the light side is okay ... do the same with the other part.  Now, the light side of that boat should be lighter and warmer ...use thick paint .. one or two strokes and leave alone.    Everything else looks pretty good.

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