Rework workshop 10

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Comment by Lorna Allan on June 20, 2012 at 9:18

Aurelia,   I would agree with Li that putting more light on the right hand side with a bit more vibrancy, though tone down or remove the green in the two distant places as it brings them forward,  would certainly change this considerably and capture the moment better.  Aside from that Well done indeed.

Comment by Ningning Li on June 18, 2012 at 11:38

Aurelia, Happy for you. Because this retouched work much more like an late afternoon landscape than your first one.I like your composition, the colours you used.  And the value of your rocks are perfect!!! It is not easy for everyone. But you did it! If I were you I would put more light. Please check again Dorian's work.  She mastered the light effect wonderfully. I wish that I could do it as she did.

Comment by Patricia Genever on June 18, 2012 at 10:07

Very nice flow of values and colour.  The right hand side looks heaps better...  Well done!!