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Hi Ro & Terry,
Terry - I think your comment to Roena on "The lost edges I mentioned, were in fashion once" is still valid.
I like to use lost edges even in landscape and still life. It is a great way to add depth and keep the eye on the focal point.
Terry I want to thank you for all the information you have given to me. Plein air on the other hand, is WYSIWYG What does WYS|WYG mean? I am very excited and can hardly wait til I can get to the store to buy some more fruit/veg/?? to paint! LOL Ro
terry clare said:,
This painting Ro, is good enough to sell as it is. You want to go a step further to improve the 3D without adding the touch of colour or with black and white. A change in composition maybe. Ambition is such a wonderful thing. A need for 3D is 3/4 angle lighting on the subject either behind or frontal and a more receding ground shape maybe a corner or something, with the fruit overlapping in front and behind, and if possible not round. Find some apples with planes. The lost edges I mentioned, were in fashion once, sorry about that one. One of the backgrounds has only to be the same tone as one or two of the edges. The advantage of still life is you can arrange everything to suit. Plein air on the other hand, is WYSIWYG to which though you can import your still life effects later for interest. I like to think of your pears as, See no evil, Hear no evil, Speak no evil, but don't get juice everywhere when you eat me. Great job, Terry
Roena King said:Thanks for the comments VERY MUCH Iwan and Terry......Great......now lets talk art! Terry, I have never done a close up such as this before. The middle pear has the other pear's stems pointing toward it, and it was the lightest so I made that the subject by sharpening up the edges of the center pear and softening the edges other two. I am not sure "WHICH" edges to lose on such a close up. Please be very specific. .............. Also, This was an exercise in compressed values so my background was as light as I could make it-value 7, but then I added some of the lighest white toward the end behind the pears trying to make them just show up. COMMENTS on the background please............. I also think I "should have the lightest side of the back on the left and the darkest on the right as the light was more behind my left shoulder/head height. It was daytime, but I did try to cover up all the lights from windows and all so that the spot light was the only real light to consider.
..........To me, this is just a OK painting. I want it to have PUNCH and when it pops up on the screen everyone will go.....wow. It is not that, and I dont know what I need to do to make it do that!!!! Any ideas? Ro
terry clare said:
Just too beautiful, and you enjoyed it as well. Can you do it for me again and again Ro to reinforce it, with variations off course, then you will automatically remember it when you add some colour. How about some lost edges as well, Terry
Iwan Warega said:If you add any colors to these fruits ,I'm taking a bite.
Roena King said:Hi, I have done another gray scale painting. I think I am really enjoying doing them too. Richard, this is my attempt at compressing the values to 3-4-5-6-7 and reserving the 1 and 9 until the very last. Am I even close to achieving the compressing idea? I would appreciate some comments, and I would encourage others to post here too. Thanks, Ro
So Gail, WHICH EDGES would you suggest to apply the lost edges to? Can you be more specific? I think I have used the lost edges in landscapes, but I did not know what to do with such a closeup as I have never painted anything like this before. Thanks, Ro
Gail Runciman-Nicholls said:Hi Ro & Terry,
Terry - I think your comment to Roena on "The lost edges I mentioned, were in fashion once" is still valid.
I like to use lost edges even in landscape and still life. It is a great way to add depth and keep the eye on the focal point.
Terry, I bought bananas, but they did not make it home! I have done a painting of a yellow onion. This exercise was from RR suggestions to pick any 5 values and paint as the limiting values make for stronger paintings. So my painting is values 9-7-5-3-1 which gives a full range. I had never tried a really dark background before either so WYS|WYG. lol Oh, I tried for some lost and found edges too. /// I knew about reflected light ON the object, but I had never noticed the reflected light in the shadow cast from the object into the shadow before. The reflected light on both the object in the shadow area and in the cast shadow area are quite bright.
Terry, Looks like I have your mind whirling with thoughts and ideas! LOL GREAT! I have signed my name as R.King for 30 years and I hate to change as I believe people recognize art and the artist by their signature sometimes. I have a lot of art out there. // I found this onion to be hard and stressful….so I would take stress breaks (he he), then it finally fell into place. // The canvas does not show through in the original painting like it does here in the photo. For the exercises I just did not take the time or use up my gesso to coat the canvas. I will try my best to remember for my paintings since you think it will improve the work. / / THE LIGHT….My work area is very limited as my studio is the kitchen table in the motor home with a “clip light” attached to the window cornice board. It is not movable except up higher or down a little lower or I might be able to place it almost over head. I will look at that. // Oh please, Terry, I encourage you to do a painting in brown tone and “post it here”. I am beginning to feel like I am the only one going through this color course at the moment! I would feel better if someone else would post beside me!// Terry, I go by Ro – because I am a sailor and I never row my boat! He he ///// I sent my painting to another friend who gave me this comment. When I looked at my B&W photo of the set up, and really paid attention, I could see the values per his statement. Here is a photo and the statement to ponder upon. ........ a good thing to keep in mind is keep your lights all in one section of the gray scale, & your shadows in the other. eg. the darkest light will always be lighter than the lightest shadow which includes reflected light in shadow.
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