ROAD TO FREEDOM

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Comment by Remegio Onia on April 11, 2011 at 15:49

Hi Diane! Yes, you are right on that and I noticed also when I posted it. I have modified this painting already because of the foreground dominant horizontal marks. I made it darker and subdued and the marks were eliminated. I still have to re-post it again soon. Thanks again for your time and your very enlightening comment.

 

Comment by diane boucher on April 9, 2011 at 18:42

Love the colours you have used and the light at the end of your path. It has lovely lights to make it a bright interesting painting. Now this is just my constructive critique in friendship :) If you had a few straight lines across the path it would stop it looking as though it is sloping off to the left.