September-Challenge-2

I decided to have another try at this. My tree was not sharp enough and I wanted a lead through into the snow paddock so broke the fence down.

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Comment by Montalvo on January 1, 2012 at 14:44: Hi Hazel, i was looking around at the other workshops that artist had joined, and i found this painting that caught my eye. I love your painting Hazel. Nice work.

Comment by Denise Maxwell on September 13, 2011 at 12:04: Hello Hazel, I really liked what you have done to adjust this and I was thinking of some further slight adjustments which I thought would help you out but as I wrote and more came to me I decided a picture is worth a...

The main things I was trying to show you here is the path is a really good idea and could use some shadows or foot prints to lead the eye more into it. The other thing that you need is a consistency of shadows, the grasses in the foreground would also need some. Atmospheric movement needs some care also and simply put the objects further into your picture plane will get cooler and less saturated as you move further away from the warmer richer colors in the foreground.

I sincerely hope you don't mind me mucking around with your picture I got a little carried away and the path could use some more care from me but it's yours idea after all.