workshop25 8x10 (2)

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Comment by Montalvo on September 26, 2013 at 7:54

I like the soft pinkish orange you. Nice.

Comment by Gina Dalkin-Davis on September 26, 2013 at 3:02

Hi Mary,

Thanks so much for the critique. Really appreciated.  I'll try your suggestinon. G.

Comment by Mary Wykes on September 26, 2013 at 2:22

I like this greyed version much better than the one with the strong blue.  This one has a really nice, soft impressionistic effect.  You've done a great job in creating that "sunset glow" - my one suggestion for improvement would be to draw a bit of that orange cloud at the bottom out farther to the left (thinly) or to pull the light into it a bit more.  It doesn't quite have the same soft quality as the clouds above it. 

Comment by Roena King on September 25, 2013 at 10:05

Another good sunset painting.  You are going to dream of sunsets for a while.  grin.  I like this one too.