I feel very lucky to be one of the few you have chosen to critisize their work.I must say each and every word in your critiqe is correct and true and some of your remarks somehow were remarks I already thought about in order to challenge myself in my next painting. For exqmple the brushstrokes and to include more drama. In fact I even wanted to crop the painting higher and cut off sone of the muddy ground beacause I felt it lacks if something but decided not to do that because there is nothing like the truth and mistakes to learn from.Waiting for the next challenge. I hope it will be intresting as this one. Thank you very much. This is, for me, is a true winning prize.