Hidden Cove retouched

Based on Karlo and Hyun's comments:
1, removed small patch of grass on the bottom right corner.
2. grayed down the color on the top of the hill to reduce the contrast little bit.

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Comment by Laura Xu on July 13, 2014 at 4:34: Hyun, you are so right! It was so crowded on the right corner before. You are a great teacher. Thank you Hyun!

Comment by Hyun(Jane) kim on July 13, 2014 at 3:59: I'm so glad to see your signature on the left on your painting , Laura :) I think it's better! Now much better!! Water is going down!

Comment by Laura Xu on July 12, 2014 at 4:34: To follow Karlo and Hyun's suggestion, I just give it another re-touch

Comment by Laura Xu on July 12, 2014 at 4:31: Ruby, thank you so much! I just had another retouch. I will upload here.

Comment by Ruby on July 11, 2014 at 3:20: Nice work Laura

Comment by Laura Xu on July 10, 2014 at 6:49: Hi Karlo and Hyun, these are great suggestions and deep thought of it. I will give another retouch to improve it. Hyun, I really like you said "z" shape stroke. I kind of feel the water need some shap, but didn't know exactly what. Thank you again both!

Comment by Hyun(Jane) kim on July 10, 2014 at 4:11: I think I agree with Karlo's last sentence. If you see strong light on the top of the right hill, u supposed to see same bright light on the left side grass as well. And I feel something need to be added on the water, like "z" shape stroke.

Comment by Karlo Bonacic on July 10, 2014 at 0:30: Hi Laura, (is this the river going towards the city or towards us), it looks to me it is going toward the city..or maybe this is just lake..Anyway this left bottom line of the hill still looks strange to me (:, I tried in photoshop to show what I mean, (and also adjusted little photo - so it looks brighter). Also it looks to me you have nice possibilities here to make one more plane (add the depth), with this front - left grass "hill", if you somehow distingush it little more from back hills (with contrast, colors or few highlights )...

Comment by Jessica Futerman on July 9, 2014 at 21:29: Lovely, nice composition & focal point - your paintings are getting more & more beautiful, Laura!