54. HalfDome

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Comment by Richard Robinson on June 1, 2016 at 11:50

Good but too much white making it chalky.

Comment by Paul Merrill on May 30, 2016 at 13:13

Nice work.  Hopefully it gets added to the workshop album.

Just a couple thoughts- It may be the camera washing it out a little but if you darken and warm your foreground colors it will help bring them forward and push back your distant mountains. You may also want to work on the transition in the foreground from left to right.  Once again, it may be the cropping of the photo but right now it appears to drop off on the right and continue farther back on the left.

Comment by diane boucher on May 30, 2016 at 11:58

Your composition is great but I think you need to have a far greater contrast between your lights and darks to make the picture have more interest and perspective.If you squint and look at your picture much of the light area is the same value and lost in each other.