Waterlilies

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Comment by Glenys Jones on April 7, 2015 at 18:03

thanks Lawrence, I agree, i'll give it a go and knock it back to make it less distinctive.

Comment by Lawrence Easton on April 7, 2015 at 12:36

Nice painting Glenys. I like the flowers and leaves in the foreground ... but I find my eye constantly drawn up to the bright blue water and the strip of golden reeds. I think, particularly with the flowers so low down in the composition, the background would be better off being less saturated and less distinct.