A wish to the waves

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Comment by Ningning Li on August 31, 2013 at 10:02

Ann,  You are absolutely right. I toned it down when I retouched it. But I feel that it was not enough. I should make it much greier. Thank you so much for your suggestion! 

Comment by Ann Turner on August 31, 2013 at 9:42

Hi Ningning, I like the story that your painting tells. The figures have character and age defined, well done. I would maybe change the green wave on the left, it is intense green and pulls the viewer over to it and out with the straight line it forms. It can stay a green color but I think it would be better if toned down a bite so your star characters shine.

Comment by Ningning Li on August 31, 2013 at 9:26

Kim, Thank you so much for encourage me. I made some corrections and photoed  it under the natural light. Small differences, but the colour is better. Happy painting!

Comment by Kim Hayes on August 31, 2013 at 8:53

Ningning .A very powerful image..great work!

Comment by Ningning Li on August 31, 2013 at 7:59

Linda, Thank you for your encouragement. Little by little I will become a semi professional. I have to hand in this painting today. So I retouched and corrected it. Will upload the final one soon.

George, It is very kind of you to pay attention to my work and analize it. I appreciate it very much. Thank you.

Comment by George on August 31, 2013 at 7:43

very good job! I can see the movement in evry caracter of the painting. It is also amazing how the lighting is done to reinforce the title Excelent work

Comment by Linda L. Kano on August 31, 2013 at 7:39

For not being professional, I think you did a great job Ningning!

Comment by Ningning Li on August 31, 2013 at 3:38

Michael, I am very happy that you like it. As I am not perfessional and did not paint a lot, I do not really paint what I am after for, but ,quite often, surprised to see what comes out, good or bad. Your approval makes me feel released and confident to give them this one for the good will. Thanks for your time and care to pay attention to my work. 

Comment by Ningning Li on August 31, 2013 at 3:14

This painting is for a donation. I am going to correct and retouch it today before I show to the people in charge. Your opinion and critiques are warmly welcomed.