Alied Arts Garden, 081115

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Comment by Laura Xu on August 15, 2015 at 16:18

Thank you Silvana!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on August 15, 2015 at 14:40

Those `palm trees are great!

Comment by Laura Xu on August 15, 2015 at 10:34

Thank you Susan for your encouragement!

Comment by Laura Xu on August 15, 2015 at 10:33

Wow, Charles, Thank you so much for your such detailed comment. I just noticed now regarding the value on the second section. I will corrected it. And also soften the palm leaves you mentioned. Thank you again!

Comment by Charles Post on August 15, 2015 at 8:56

Correction, regarding the tower, I meant to say second section...RIGHT side not the left side.

Comment by Charles Post on August 15, 2015 at 8:54

Wonderful image.  I appreciate the way your have express light and used cool blues and warm pinks.  Simple but dramatic sky and believable trees.   A couple of observations:  Purely for composition, I would extend the branches of the left-most palm tree further to the left and curve them downward.  Also soften the hard dark curve on the right side of that palm so its leaves morph into the palm tree to its right.  In the tower, second section from bottom left side, the value is lighter than the values above and to the left, implying more light on that section.  Was that what you intended?

Comment by Susan Burke on August 15, 2015 at 5:45

Terrific, you light sings!