Lieu de passage

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Comment by Jon Main on June 13, 2014 at 5:22

Thanks Anne - those are good points - in fact, I'd already been thinking about them!

Silvana - thanks to you!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on June 12, 2014 at 14:35

Really nice Jon!!!

Comment by Ann Turner on June 12, 2014 at 12:11

Hi Jon, I like the way that you have painted the trees with nice greens and variety of shapes. The broken color is well done and integrated thru the painting. The bridge has good variegated use of color. Now a few things to think about, the dark tree on the left is cut in half on the side of the painting,it also points up and out of the painting and is a dark value. It is distracting, do you need it? On the left side the value shift between the 2 hills is too strong, the forward one is a little  dark. Also check the light value above the landscape it follows the outline of the trees and mountains just a quick fix to smooth it across.