tried to take the comments (thanks Anne, Stu, jessica...) into account.. ..I'm particularly interested in color temperature at the moment..maybe should have used more grays... ?

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Comment by Jon Main on November 27, 2013 at 8:38

Thanks, Britt. Yeah, but when you look at some artists' work and see the power of subtlely... ...hmm...just now I'm getting hung up on paint application/brushwork - there's always fun to be had ;( !!!!

Comment by Britt Greenland on November 26, 2013 at 11:20

Jon, I'm afraid I fall into the "over the top" chroma category, myself.  I especially like the one on the right!  I love watching people at art shows.  They definitely gravitate towards the bright colors.  I was just telling my hubby that at a show one time, and just on cue we heard a lady say "OOOOh, look at that lovely colorful art!!!"  That being said, I think "follow your heart" is never a bad idea ; ).  

Comment by Jon Main on November 24, 2013 at 22:38

Thanks, Anne and Jessica - noted - yep, that's Provence!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on November 24, 2013 at 21:57

Two beautiful Provencal scenes!

Comment by Ann Turner on November 24, 2013 at 20:09

Hi Jon, great retouch on this. I like the shadow wall and light on the roof makes sense now. It also helped to lighten the Cyprus behind the greenhouse. The foreground shadow is better now but the lower right area reads a little too warm. Beautiful charming painting !

Comment by Jon Main on November 24, 2013 at 9:26

Thanks, Dor. Well, I think a lot of people like bright color - but I've got a suspicion that using grays with some higher chroma areas would make them sing more? On the other hand, maybe it's best to follow one's heart? Hmm....

Comment by Dorian Aronson on November 24, 2013 at 9:03

I am learning even gray has a temperature!?  You are young and enthusiastic and I enjoy seeing your work.  As Richard says, to each his own about how much gray to use! I  lean toward preferring bold color........smiles to you Jon : )) 

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