Clang! Clang! - Transit I

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Comment by Ningning Li on July 23, 2013 at 5:57

Very interesting tittle, I love it!  Excellent perspectives, the cable car carrying  the viewers down to the beach with Clang, Clang bell rings. Those yellowish  and light blue, and green greys and the value contrast created a warm sunny day successfuly.  Your details are so well done to show the viewers a busy moving street.I am so afraid of painting cars as it is very difficult to create a likeness, you did so many. Stuart and Michael are also paint a lot of cars. Maybe boys are better at painting cars and love to do it.  That is an good effort and very conviencing. One minor thing is about the shadow, the car at the right corner of the canvas can be lighter in color as the sun is on its left side. My shadows of the trees and cable car are also need to be corrected.  So many details...  This is a well planed and well down piece, I enjoy it.

Comment by Jessica Futerman on July 23, 2013 at 5:21

You've really captured the movement on the street Jon - and you've shown the slope down to the water really well.  I like your buildings too & the distant cars.  

Comment by Silvana M Albano on July 23, 2013 at 4:33

Jon, is it the same painting with different light? What have you done?

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