This is a commission I am doing at the moment. Would love some critique... please be honest.

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Comment by Dorian Aronson on February 11, 2013 at 7:56

I would like to see you play down the red rose.  Too much light on the fellow's arm, otherwise a lovely painting.  I so wish I had your talent...........smiles : ))

Comment by Trevor Erskine on February 6, 2013 at 11:58
No Caryl , it does not detract.
Comment by Caryl Park on February 6, 2013 at 6:46

Trevor thank you for that... I will definitely give that a try. I really appreciate an help with this one, am I being fussy with the dominant red rose?

Comment by Trevor Erskine on February 6, 2013 at 6:33

Hi Caryl,

I like the work, spontaneous and charming. The girl is there 100%, the boy 90+%.

I think he would be improved if you gently darkened the light triangular patch between ear lobe and chin ,

very gently, to read  more like the girls. Hope this helps.

Trevor Erskine


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