dor's Park Lane III Corrected

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Comment by Ann Turner on June 29, 2012 at 11:45

HI Dor, great painting. I like the energy and motion in the sky. The colors and value of the cliffs are good but they need the same energy that the sky has. Just let yourself go a little more and the whole painting will sing ! Happy painting !

Comment by Ruby on June 27, 2012 at 18:36

This is good Dor. Lovely shading and I really like the colors. Well done :))

Comment by Dorian Aronson on June 27, 2012 at 10:19

Sure does look like a man made structure! I worked real hard getting those lines straight!.................  Hahahaaa..........thanks Diane and smiles............see you next workshop!!!!  yes!  I am waiting for the fish to swim in with all these strong tides......minor hurricane here right now....... : ))

Comment by diane boucher on June 27, 2012 at 9:49

This is great Dorian 1 Love your sky and 2 love the way you captured the forground greenery, I feel the lines in the center of your scene are a little man made straight and not like mother nature would have created them I know this comes with simplifying the scene as RR wants us to do but I think it makes it "building " like with a swimming pool rather than wind blown cliffs and a river. Your colours and shadowing is great. :):) I am looking forward to the next workshop as I missed this one.

Comment by Dorian Aronson on June 27, 2012 at 6:21

Hi Everyone.

I have taken it back to photoshop and gotten rid of that hard black lettering.    Smiles.........dor:))