Dress Rehearsal? Supporting Each Other?
Still working on refining this one. I would appreciate any suggestions or comments. Do I need to put more people in the mid ground? What about the title?
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Comment by Patricia Genever on June 2, 2012 at 16:04
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Wanda, in my opinion the eye moves around too much in this painting.
The focal point is not strong enough and is competing with the people either side of the couple. The clothing colour is too similar. In my opinion the girl on the bicycle is a distraction, as she does not add to the story.. It's romantic enough with the couple in the foreground... :))
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