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Comment by Walda Juhl on October 3, 2016 at 4:19

Congrats, Mark upon getting a critique!!

Comment by Mark Price, on September 30, 2016 at 18:20

Thank you Richard, I can see the issues that you mention...I will adjust and see if I can improve it.

Also a thank you to Mairo Piroue for your comment, appreciated.

Comment by Richard Robinson on September 30, 2016 at 15:59

Nice composition Mark and strong colour use. Would like to see a little more colour variation in the water (green shifts?), particularly an overall slight colour change from top to bottom, which would stop it appearing so flat. Good seagulls but it shows you the importance of getting a photo without frontal light because it gives them no interesting shadows and flattens the form. I would be looking for a way to separate the birds, like with shadow on the bird behind or colour change on the back of the front bird.

Comment by Mairo Piroue on September 30, 2016 at 0:14

I really like this version of the seagulls. There is something very serene with the stance of these gulls. It's a really nice composition and I really like the colour harmony.

Comment by Mark Price, on September 26, 2016 at 0:21

12x16," w/s oils on canvas.

from image taken by myself at East Fremantle, WA on the Swan river.