Foggy Day

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Comment by Steinunn Einarsdottir on February 15, 2014 at 7:17

Wow, one feels the cold!  

Comment by Laura Xu on February 6, 2014 at 16:53

Hi Jon, thank you for the comment. I can understand your point. May be I can give a few soft brush here, there on the bus to make the bus more atmosphere.

Comment by Jon Main on February 6, 2014 at 9:16

I like the concept of the background hazy/in fog - but I feel that the foreground isn't sort of integrating somehow - needs to be softer looser ?

Comment by Laura Xu on February 4, 2014 at 14:46

Ann, you made a few points here. The figure on the street actually with motorcycle, I had trouble to paint it. May be I just remove it if I can not make it looks properly. Another composition issue you point out. Right now I felt the figure is like squeezed in to the canvas. To survive this painting is never fram it :-). Thank you Ann!

Comment by Ann Turner on February 4, 2014 at 12:50

Laura nice feeling of fog on the buildings it looks mystical. The perspective on the bus is good, it feels as if it is moving away. I like the figures walking at the back of the bus, is one in the light and one in the shadow ? The figure on the street with the yellow light is confusing for me. The figure of the large lady is well done and gives a sense of perspective to the rest of the painting. She might be a little close to the bottom edge, pulling your eye down to that corner. When framed she might look like she i standing on the frame. Just a thought for a beautiful painting

Comment by Laura Xu on February 4, 2014 at 11:14

Thank you Linda!