Golden Sunset at the Dock - W29 II

Oils 23x35 cm. Following suggestions I have tried to brighten the 'transom'. I have also changed the back ship a bit, added the ladder and softened the edges in the back buildings. Hope it is better now! The colours are closer to what it really is. I will leave the other for a while for comparison purposes! :)

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Comment by Huda jodah A.Omar on March 27, 2014 at 1:49: wow love it, very vibrant colours

Comment by Silvana M Albano on February 28, 2014 at 3:44: Very original Jocelyn!!!! You have found that site here!!!!

Comment by Jocelyn Arsenault on February 27, 2014 at 17:13: The nicest thing is to find a place where fellows painters are honest in their comments and never forget that even if I had a few commisionned work I am still an amateur that is eager to learn new tricks and even old dog can learn new tricks. I am posting on my site a few copy of my left leg for fun. The middle one is my own painting

Comment by Silvana M Albano on February 27, 2014 at 12:10: Well, I 've been at the site since Workshop 19! One year ago... but started painting the previous year. I must admit it's impossible not to learn!!!! :) !!!!

Comment by Jocelyn Arsenault on February 27, 2014 at 11:46: A am also new to this site but have an amateur experience over the years and you did very well with that painting. You are working properly with your colors and drawing. I hope to improve myself also. THanks

Comment by Silvana M Albano on February 27, 2014 at 10:48: Jocelyn, really loved your description on my painting! I am quite new at this, and this site, its beautiful atmosphere and all the artists active here has helped me improve an awful lot! :)

Comment by Silvana M Albano on February 27, 2014 at 10:42: Thanks Ningning!

Comment by Jocelyn Arsenault on February 27, 2014 at 10:10: You did a fantastic painting Silvana. The misty background and it's color give a lot of depth to this painting.The middle sailboat help appreciate that depth. The boat, the bird, the ladder and the dock give a nice colored foreground with the waves rythm. A lot of work and a beautiful result

Comment by Ningning Li on February 27, 2014 at 9:55: Wonderful work, Silvana. Nancy is so right you really capured that sunny glow. It is Beautiful!