IMG_0609 Workshop 2 painting

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Comment by Tui Ellison on October 27, 2011 at 10:18

Thank you for your comments. I will take your advice

Comment by Sandra kelly on October 27, 2011 at 10:03

Hi nice painting and use of colour the main problem with this painting is that the trees and river are too straight bring the height up on a couple of trees and change the river bank so it is not straight.

Comment by susie gregory on October 19, 2011 at 10:58

hi tui..i love that name and where are you from???....i love your warmer tones in the foreground and your cooler ones as you head back toward the trees and mountains.  i think you might have a bit more interest if you varied the sizes of the trees on the right...they seem to be lining up with the mountains behind them..and maybe darken up the stream a bit in the foreground to lead your eye into the picture a bit...also make it a bit wider in the foreground...what do you think?