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Comment by Elizabeth D. Smith on March 7, 2015 at 11:34

Oh Shoman I just can't help myself. I noticed something that needs correcting and it won't take you long. I thought the openings that you made on the left where the lady was, was windows. And I wondered why you would leave the awning there.  I think you have meant for them to be doors as they have steps under them. I want you to look at your lady walking away from the doors. The door next to her needs to be a little taller than her and the door closest to the viewer needs to be a tad taller than the next door which is next to the lady. I don't think that the lady could get into that house if she wanted to visit. Bringing the door up to your awning would made it perfect. You are doing so well. You have really nailed the colors and the figures are great.

Comment by Elizabeth D. Smith on March 7, 2015 at 9:30

Shoman this is much better and leaving the other figure out makes it different than the others paintings. Very nice.! I like it.