Orange with white Jug

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Comment by Perri Rabin on March 27, 2012 at 17:48

Hi Marta the circular theme that repeats throughout your composition is very pleasing. I have some good ideas for you and the over all composition is very interesting!

Comment by Ningning Li on March 27, 2012 at 14:25

Thank you, Susie. I hope that Marta have time to notice our comments.

Comment by susie gregory on March 27, 2012 at 14:20

good observation, li!

Comment by Ningning Li on March 27, 2012 at 13:01

Marta, I like your compostion , drawings and brushstrokes. the colour is good too. If I were you I would make the background behind the apple a darker value or different hue so the apple could be show off. Good job!

Comment by susie gregory on March 26, 2012 at 2:49

keep at it, kiddo!

Comment by Marta Hattenbach on March 25, 2012 at 5:53

Hi Susie, Thank you for your comment and advice, I am learning.......  Marta Hattenbach

Comment by susie gregory on March 25, 2012 at 4:03

nice reflected light marta...i might have placed the spout of the pitcher pointing inward instead of leading the eye outward