Acrylics on paper. 24x24cm. I'll try to make a second version in oils. I must admit I feel more at ease with them!Critiques welcome!!!

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Comment by Steinunn Einarsdottir on August 12, 2015 at 13:20

What a happy looking painting, love the bright colors with the receding hills/mountains Silvana.

Comment by Silvana M Albano on August 12, 2015 at 13:02

Thank you so much Tammy and Glenys!!! Very nice to hear from you!!! :) !!

Comment by Glenys Jones on August 10, 2015 at 17:28

this one stopped me in my tracks, I love your distant mountains and vibrant colour and contrasts. well done Silvana!!

Comment by Tammy Wolcott on August 10, 2015 at 15:49

Beautiful bold colours and brush strokes.  Great job!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on August 10, 2015 at 9:07

WOW!!!! How many beautiful comments!!! Thank you SO much!!!!!! Now Charles, what an interesting and enrichening critique!!!! THANK YOU! To tell you the truth, I always forget to study and see the sight circle in a painting... I need to place that in a to do list before I call a painting complete... Still SO much to learn...

Comment by Sherry Hullender on August 10, 2015 at 7:24

Love your bright colors

Comment by Charles Post on August 10, 2015 at 4:53

There is a lot to like about this painting, starting with its boldness and energy of colors and movement.  Compositionally however, the grouping of the dark trees and the two large boulders in mid-tones creates a circle in the center of your painting with the larger boulder being almost dead center.   The movement you created lower right to mid-left leads the viewer off the painting rather than turning the eye up the valley. You might solve both issues (composition and movement) by maybe (maybe) moving the larger rock and some of the trees to the left edge with highlights to pull the movement from lower right to mid-left then turning us up to the center opening in the valley.  The light grass on the top of the boulders take away from the highlights on them.  To me those highlights call for hard edge.  The cast shadows on the rocks would extend across the entire back of the boulders and into the grass behind them based on how you have identified the sunlight coming from upper right.  A mixture of your blue in the mountains (or ultramarine blue) and burnt umber will create interesting darks for the shadows and maintain harmony.  

Comment by Susan Burke on August 10, 2015 at 4:00

Silvana, this is beautiful!

Comment by Ruby on August 10, 2015 at 1:55

Awesome!! Very lovely brush strokes - LOVE IT !!

Comment by Jon Main on August 9, 2015 at 21:35

Good grief, Silvana - superb!

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