Oil on board, 60 x 80cm

I've got 3 versions of this on the go - the revisions to the first one aren't working so far - argghh! This is the second version - there was a boat behing the main boat that I took out, I'm thinking I need it back in!

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Comment by Jon Main on August 29, 2016 at 23:18

Hi, Joy - thanks - yeah, I wondered about the undulations - I think I'll add the second boat and work on it some more!

Comment by Jon Main on August 29, 2016 at 7:08

Thanks, Aurelia - those are good points - you know how it is - once you start to hesitate and think about things you sort of lose the rhythm you started with :( - it is more the first one that"s giving me problems

Comment by Aurelia Sieberhagen on August 29, 2016 at 5:17

This one's color harmony is better and I like this one, but I like the previous bigger boat that overlaps the jetty and I would add some of that blue of the jetty to reflect into the reflection of the water and soften the edges where the jetty meets the water.  Well done Jon!


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