9x12 oil on canvas board. This is very experimental for me. I appreciate any comments you can give.
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thank you Ian for your comment!
Thank you Jessica, Dor for you comments. It is very encouraging!
Lovely painting - you've really kept it loose & managed not to put in too much detail! I especially like the trolley & suggestions of cars parked along the side of the road.
Fabulous! Smiles : ))
Nice simplification of a hard subject. The feeling of going down and to the sea and the perspective is well done. Just darken the water slightly and smooth it out. The trolly car is very nice and I ike your choice of warm tones against the blue of the water/sky area. The car on the right is a little small when compared with the trolley they appear to be side by side or the car closer when you compare wheels. The green tree above the trolley is a triangle shape. The trolley would shine more if the tree shape becomes more abstract . Very well done !
No I haven't I 'l take a look before I start mine! Thanks for the tip!
Thank you Silvana for you kind comments. The connection area bothered me too. I will soft it little bit later. I never painted cityscape at all. I watched Richard's video 5 times before I started myown painting. It is certainly not easy workshop. I will do more practice. Did you look at Bryan Mark Taylor's cityscape? it is just very beautiful. I went to his galary in Carmel to see his painting in person yesterday. Hope it can help me to improve for my painting.
You are fast Laura!!!! I haven't even watched the video yet, but looking at your painting I see that it won't be so easy... !!! I like the foreground of your painting a lot. the tram , the buldings and the car. What bugs me is the connection there at the end of the street with the water. I don't know how to change it, but perhaps a softer edge? Just writing when thinking....
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