Meanwhile, back in Scotland... storm clearing...

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Comment by Jon Main on February 8, 2014 at 9:48

OK, I've integrated the crits/comments/suggestion/help - thanks, guys! I'll put up a photo tom.

Comment by Jessica Futerman on February 7, 2014 at 22:44

Love the line of the roofs of the houses against the blue of the sky!   I agree with Anne about the drawing of the yellow/white boat.  Something not quite right, I think with the cabin.  If you wanted, you could even paint out the cabin altogether & just extend the brick wall?  I really like the scene!

Comment by Ann Turner on February 7, 2014 at 19:45

I like the dark moody sky hanging over the town. The painting feels like it is slipping to the right a little, the yellow/white boat is listing to the right and the wall slopes to the right taking us strongly in that direction. If you can fix the perspective of the boat and boost up the wall a little I think it would help. The light on the town roofs etc is great and I like the palette you have used

Comment by Linda McNeill on February 7, 2014 at 10:46

East Neuk of Fife. A beautiful part of Scotland.

Comment by Jon Main on February 7, 2014 at 10:25

It's so nice to have people look at one's, ahem, work ;D. Thanks, Linda and Christina - I think it's somewhere called something Neuk? (not set foot in Scotland since 1983!)

Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on February 7, 2014 at 9:50

Very nice work!

Comment by Linda McNeill on February 7, 2014 at 9:18

Crail? Very nice, Jon