Wedding Bells

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Comment by Jon Main on October 2, 2012 at 9:11

Hi, Susan thanks for looking - and even more for commenting - that's precious!!! I hadn't considered that sandbar - maybe I should just take it out - OK I'll have a look at it. You've got a good eye to notice the wheeel lighter in tone!

Comment by Susan Skuse on October 1, 2012 at 10:12

I like the strong complementary colour scheme and the movement of the flag.  The female figure is particularly good and the cart is very well handled - I like that you made the further wheel lighter in tone.  I'm finding the yellow sand bar in the middle distance a bit distracting - maybe its too strong in chroma, maybe its shape: maybe both.