Workshop 13

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Comment by Jane See on September 20, 2012 at 9:47

Thanks Jon. I get too carried away with loads of paint as usual. 

Infact these was my 1st attempt painting lightly.

Comment by Jon Main on September 20, 2012 at 7:02

Hi Jane, I agree with Joan - the water/foreground is truly excellent - great color!, but the mountains are perhaps too dark and sharp?? Good work!

Comment by Jane See on September 19, 2012 at 22:08

Hi Joan, thank you. May be you are right, I need to work on that.

Comment by Joan Brantome on September 19, 2012 at 4:34

hi Jane,  Good job.  My only critique is the mountains in the background may compete too much with your center of interest? Your use of color in the waves is great.