Workshop October_rev1

I kind of rushed into colouring because of other stuff I need to work on. I was starting adding details (leaves, grass, etc) but it almost seems better with a loose brushwork. Opinions much appreciated as usual:)

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Comment by Debby Badder on October 21, 2011 at 11:52: Hi Paolo, is this an oil? Love the soft tones and gentle lights on the river. :)

Comment by Marina Laliberte on October 21, 2011 at 11:39: Really like this dreamy version.

Comment by susie gregory on October 21, 2011 at 0:43: i really love the looseness of this!!

Comment by Paolo Puggioni on October 20, 2011 at 20:34: Thanks!
And thanks Richard for the feedback, all good points.
I fixed those elements and added some details here and there, hopefully this evening I should be able to post my final:)

Comment by Barbara Stucki on October 20, 2011 at 16:14: It has wonderful atmosphere and great depth. The cliff is very eye-catching, great job.

Comment by Casey Toussaint on October 20, 2011 at 5:28: I think it's gorgeous.

Comment by Richard Robinson on October 19, 2011 at 18:26: Yes really nice atmospherics Paolo. I feel like it could do with some more interesting features on the left, maybe a path or some rocks or trees, and the values in the trees on the right are a little confused at te moment. Also the exposed river bank on the right could perhaps do with some more breaking down - the straight edge of grass looks a little manmade. Other than that I like the concept and the structure in the cliff and the light effects.