A passing storm

The wind was blowing the dark clouds & rainstorm away, and the sun was lighting up the rocks & water once in a while.
Would love to hear your comments & things to improve on this one :)

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Comment by Jessica Futerman on September 24, 2015 at 20:09: Thank you Cristina!

Comment by Cristina Mihailescu on September 19, 2015 at 15:00: Wonderful!!!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on September 19, 2015 at 2:17: Thank you very much Glenys!

Comment by Glenys Jones on September 18, 2015 at 16:20: Beautiful Jessica

Comment by Jessica Futerman on September 17, 2015 at 22:55: Thank you very much Michael! This was fun to paint.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on September 17, 2015 at 17:16: Hi Jessica. Great painting!! ...I agree with Jeri's comments.

Comment by Jessica Futerman on September 17, 2015 at 6:30: Jeri, thank you very much for your thoughtful comments & suggestions which are all good - I'll work on those areas some more! Thank you Jon for your encouragement!

Comment by Jon Main on September 17, 2015 at 5:05: Another good subject and compo, Jessica! Nice color harmony and good unified light effect too - really like it!

Comment by Jeri McDonald on September 17, 2015 at 2:53: Jessica this has little to critique but I would maybe soften the edges of the darkest rock next to the spray. The spray of the wave is very convincing. The only thing I would do is to make it look less fan like at the top by shortening one or two so they are not all equal. Make more random. Otherwise I love the colors and the way you faded off the back rocks. You could add some blue from the sky onto the rocks in the front to reflect it. Also, make that last rock formation with the green grass on it more irregular. Carve into the shape so it doesn't look like a dome. Does that help?