(attempted) Update 2

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Comment by Jon Main on July 12, 2016 at 4:27

Hi, Charles - thanks for dropping by, man - appreciate it!

Comment by Charles Post on July 11, 2016 at 11:00

Nice composition.  Like your use of limited palette.

Comment by Jon Main on July 9, 2016 at 3:44

Hi, Aurelia - Thanks, - I tried to lighten the shadows and had big big probs :(  - that's why they are so red!

Comment by Aurelia Sieberhagen on July 9, 2016 at 1:47

A lovely painting Jon.  Nice drawing of the boats too!  A red shadow?  Yes I like Ruby's clouds as well.  Good job thou!

Comment by Jon Main on July 8, 2016 at 17:45

Hi, Ruby and Michael - OK, of course!!! - It was bugging me too - thanks, guys!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on July 8, 2016 at 10:38

Jon, you know I am always talking about making  good shapes ... well that includes clouds also ..... take a look at ruby's cloud shape ... it's pretty good.  BTW, when you fix that cloud, this painting will be a winner!!!! 

Comment by Ruby on July 8, 2016 at 7:33

Jon here is a little something I played around with,,, very rough but maybe it will help a little.  Just ignore me if you feel I am being a little picky :))