Boatyard scene revised
I cropped the painting for a better composition, and adjusted the background and the foreground. Tried to do better quality photos, I think it looks better now, what do you think?
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Comment by Andras Kalmar on July 10, 2016 at 14:39
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Thanks Michael and Jon for your constructive comments, I appreciate your thoughts. To be honest personally I like the sailing yachts more than the fishing vessel, and thats why I gave too much attention to those.
Will have a go on lowering the values on the yachts a little bit.
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Comment by Michael J. Severin on July 10, 2016 at 11:07
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I agree with Jon. On the shadow sides of the hulls, instead of trying to put color into white paint, try mixing a gray first ... ... and then tint the gray. Then you can paint the warm reflected light into that. The first boat on the right is fine.
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Comment by Jon Main on July 9, 2016 at 20:54
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Hi, Andras - looking good! Personally I would lower the value (darken) the two left hand boats - they are taking my eyes away from the center of interest (the right hand boat)...the bottom hulls could be quite a bit darker and the white sides slightly darker, maybe with a reflect light (from the ground) effect. Your drawing and color are very nice!
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