W24Garrapata,Retouched

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Comment by Ningning Li on August 18, 2013 at 12:24

Mario, thanks for your encouragement.

Comment by Laura Xu on August 18, 2013 at 8:40

Ningning, from this painting I can see your confidence. I always like your brush work and colors in your painting. The water and racks in the painting are well, well done I think.

Comment by mario alberto velazquez on August 18, 2013 at 7:51

Superb !!

Comment by Ningning Li on August 18, 2013 at 3:05

Silvana, thanks. Waiting to see your final work. When you put on those seagulls mix a bit of oil in your paint to make more fluent brush strokes . This is what I learned from my mistake. Good luck.

Comment by Silvana M Albano on August 18, 2013 at 1:28

Great Ningning! I am reading the comments and realized I have also forgotten to add the seagulls!!!!!

Comment by Ningning Li on August 17, 2013 at 12:25

Thank you, Michael. I keep it in mind for the next retouch.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on August 17, 2013 at 11:15

Well I love it Ningning!!  ....The grass might be a little too warm .....but it still looks good!!!!

Comment by Ningning Li on August 17, 2013 at 7:20

Thanks to Michael, I greyed down the colours to make them more harmonized and put on some seagulls in the distance which I forgot. There was no enough natural light to take this photo eventhough in the middle day. But if I use the light on the celling it would become very warm which is not closed to the colour of my original painting. I found out that Lima has no place to sell lights for artist. So the background bluish purple grey became dull iron grey . I will wait for more than one month for the sun to come back and then take another photo of this work for my record.  Any suggestions and critiques  will be welcomed.

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