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I think Gondolas are not symetrical - one side is higher than the other so the gondolier can turn it - at least I think that's what i saw on the video! so I'd leave the gondola as is..better withthe softer edges on the buildings as well!!
Great job!!
very good work, and it is an interesting challenge, learning a lot from all of you.
I like the "goldie" look in you painting Jim. I agree with Ann in softening the buildings in the background for the atmospheric purposes which I also found hard to do.
Hi Jim, hope I didn't mess you up! Just straighten the curve of the end and it will line up. It is a very hard boat to draw! Yes, Richard's is a little "off" also. I'm struggling with mine as well. I agree with Ann that the dome is too large.
The softened buildings are great. . . It would help to move it back into the atmosphere if you make the domes small and softer. I think the central one is a little large.
Wow! Great! I understand now why you've titled the other one 'original'!
This is a replacement photo after making a few changes suggested by some of you. Sharon I agree with you about the alignment perspective and you can see how I have changed the aft by hopefully looking at the back fin from a different angle. I looked at Richard's painting and his boat too does not line up correctly. Oh well at my skill level that's perhaps the best I can do.
Also, Lori you can see that I have softened the edges of the buildings and I believe it does help. I may redo this painting and make the buildings smaller which should also move them further back. Thanks all for the comments.Unfortunately by deleting the original I have lost your comments.
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