Hawaiian Lagoon

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Comment by Joy Driggs on March 28, 2016 at 6:10

Thanks, Charles!

Comment by Charles Post on March 27, 2016 at 11:46

Can feel the breezes and smell the salt air.  Nice.

Comment by Joy Driggs on March 10, 2016 at 4:45

Thank you for your comments and suggestions, Michael & Jessica! I definitely appreciate the feedback. :-)

Comment by Michael J. Severin on March 9, 2016 at 3:42

Hi Joy.  I like your arrangement of the main masses... nice abstract design of the clouds. You have gradation in the sky and water, but you also need gradation in your landmass ... both in value, temperature, and color.  Also, try to avoid curving lines touching the edge .. either take the line out of the picture edge and then bring it back in, or move the entire line inward.

 

Comment by Jessica Futerman on March 8, 2016 at 21:48

Lovely scene & beautiful colour, Joy!  I especially like the soft clouds in the distance & the foliage and rocks.  It is quite likely the angle of the photo, but there seems to be a very slight tilt upwards in the sea and base of the cliffs as you get close to the horizon line?