A Sunny Afternoon

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Comment by Michael J. Severin on May 27, 2014 at 1:25

A good composition Jessica.  You are really getting the hang of the composition stuff.  May I suggest that you put more color into your lights  ..yellows and oranges; and more color into your shadows ..more blues and violets.  Your foreground shadow on the road is much too dark.  The yellow wall on the far left ..is in shadow, but you have it in the light family ...put it in the dark family where it belongs.  Last thing ..take a blob of light  warm color and one  stroke it where the light is coming from behind the yellow wall ..punch that up with nice thick paint.....that is your focal point ...

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