Slough View, Palo Alto

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Comment by Laura Xu on December 21, 2014 at 6:51

Jessica, Thank you!!!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on December 18, 2014 at 18:37

Beautiful work, Laura - looks even better now!

Comment by Laura Xu on December 18, 2014 at 10:04

I had update this painting based on comments. Thanks you everybody for the wonderful comments!

Comment by Laura Xu on December 7, 2014 at 8:25

Thank you Jessica, Silvana!

Comment by Silvana M Albano on December 7, 2014 at 7:45

This is just great Laura!

Comment by Jessica Futerman on December 7, 2014 at 2:26

So instructive reading Michael's comments!  When I looked at this, there was something about the little water shapes in the back that caught my attention, and now I understand why.  It's going to be even a lovelier painting with these small changes, Laura.

Comment by Laura Xu on December 6, 2014 at 16:12

Michael, I will remove the top little bit water as it make me confused and also need to do better job on that area.

Comment by Michael J. Severin on December 6, 2014 at 15:43

Okay, I see what you are talking about.  I did not see that bit of water over there!! ...it makes better sense now Laura ..thanks.  :))

Comment by Laura Xu on December 6, 2014 at 14:27

Michael, Thank you so much for your detailed comments! I am so surprised by your professional artist sharp eye. You really pointed out all my struggled areas in this painting. The big issue I have in the painting is Horizon Line. I don't think it is very clear for myself now. But I defined Horizon line is far away bit water. In this case I need suggestion some water on right side of the tree. I need to think about it again. May be I should extend the bit water to the left more and make the horizon line more obvious. I will have to review this again more carefully and fix it. Thank you Michael very much as always!!!

Comment by Laura Xu on December 6, 2014 at 14:00

Thank Jon, Olivia! I need check Camille Przewodek out Jon.

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