Marseille market street, Reworked

Made so many changes in this, trying to get it right - thanks Michael for your comments on the first version on how to improve it. I decided to remove the lady in the batik dress as she was too overwhelming! I preferred the lady who was walking beside her. It's very overworked now, but I do like it better.
25 x 35
WSO on canvas

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Comment by Jessica Futerman on January 25, 2015 at 22:20: Thank you, Ningning!

Comment by Ningning Li on January 25, 2015 at 15:39: I follow Michael's comment.

Comment by Jessica Futerman on January 24, 2015 at 19:12: Thanks for taking the time to leave such kind comments, Pauline, Dor & Nancy! Dor, I do agree with you about the street! Really I should paint this one again & apply what I learned.

Comment by Nancy Sands on January 24, 2015 at 18:51: Lovely, colorful market. Good job on the figures as well. Bravo!

Comment by Dorian Aronson on January 24, 2015 at 8:39: Your painting is on my mind! I need to tell you I liked your pavement (street) more in the other painting. However your produce area is awesome. Smiles to you again ;-)

Comment by Pauline Le Merle on January 24, 2015 at 8:22: This is great Jessica, your fruit stalls are so convincing so are your figures! :-}

Comment by Jessica Futerman on January 24, 2015 at 1:41: Dor & Michael; thanks so much for your comments - I appreciate it!

Comment by Michael J. Severin on January 23, 2015 at 20:38: Excellent work, Jessica. I like your simplified color shapes. You have kept your bright colours together and not spread all over the painting ... that is good. The colors sing against the grays ... you have planned it well.

Comment by Dorian Aronson on January 23, 2015 at 20:02: Hi Jessica
For some reason my computer is acting up and I will have to come back and give you a vote. Right now it won't let me. I love your market, the buildings and people. Smiles coming your way :-)

Comment by Jessica Futerman on January 22, 2015 at 20:50: Laura & Cristina, thank you so much for your always very encouraging remarks! I think looking at it today that the glow in the back buildings still needs some more work - they seem to be on fire! :)